'Wrong First Impression' - 1st Draft

[masterairboarder]

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Here is one of my current songs - tell me what you think- if you want to read some more of my songs then tell me coz i have a few - cheers!!!

-----WRONG FIRST IMPRESSION-----

(A REMINDER OF THE ONE IDIOT THAT MESSED UP MY LIFE COMPLETELY - WHY DID I CHASE YOU?)

That first night I noticed you
You seemed so nice and sensitive
I thought that you were so cool
Thought you'd show me how to live

Looks like I was wrong about you
I made one hell of a misjudgment
I must have read you back to front
You gave me the wrong first impression

You took my heart and tore it up
Then went for another girl
I was alone with my broken shame
I hope that you rot in hell

Looks like I was wrong about you
I made one hell of a misjudgment
I must have read you back to front
You gave me the wrong first impression

I wasted my time on you
I can't believe I though I like you
I know what I've got to do
Rid you from my life completly

Looks like I was wrong about you
I made one hell of a misjudgment
I must have read you back to front
You gave me the wrong first impression

Looks like I was wrong about you
I made one hell of a misjudgment
I must have read you back to front
You gave me the wrong first impression

PS The bit in brackets at the start is just my dedication
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[roxiecheerchika]

that was very cute...i think the verses need to be a little longer.. other than that i liked it alot...i'd love to see more of ur work.

[masterairboarder]

Thanks - I'll post another song on the board - one called 'I'm Sorry'