Hooked on the Past.

[behindTHEmask]

((I'd really like everyone's opinion. I'm going for emo lyrics, what do you think?))

Hooked On The Past.

We’d always walk hand in hand,
I always knew you’d understand;
What I thought,
Who I am,
Why can’t we go back to that again?

And I never said I was sorry …<br>
[Chorus]
Two cuts on my wrist,
Two streams of blood,
Two broken hearts,
On everything that was,
All those days of suffering,
Eating at my mind,
Why can’t I just hold you,
Why can’t I love you one last time,

You’d always lift me up,
When I was crawling on the ground,
You’d always grab the handle of the gun,
When I was struck and death bound,
You always knew what to say,
When I was falling down,
Why’d you go and take that away,
When it was what I needed.

And I never said I was sorry…<br>
[Chorus]

I didn’t mean to hurt you,
Shatter the fragments of your heart,
I wasn’t being myself,
(I wasn’t being myself)
Can you not mistake these truths for lies? (for lies)
Can I just be with you one last time?

And I never said I was sorry…<br>
[Chorus]

But I never said I was sorry
For everything I’d done
And I never said I loved you
(Never said I loved you)

[Chorus]

[masterairboarder]

this is great - i love what you are trying to say - its a theme ive seen done that many times im fed up with it - but this is better than anything ive read in ages - lyrics were great rhythm was great the whole thing was great 10/10

[behindTHEmask]

Why thank you. That means a lot.

[frontpagenews]

I totally love these lyrics, I think I read the song when it was in an earlier stage and I loved it then but its even better now. I could definitely see a band making this song a hit. Nice one!

[behindTHEmask]

THank you Sarah! YOU DA BOMB!

[vampiressknight]

Oh wow....Everything I have read by you continues to make me...feel. I don't really know why, it just DOES. So keep doing as great as you are.

[behindTHEmask]

I'm glad I'm making someone feel. Thanks for the input.

[pacificwriter]

Im not really a "emo" person, but it sounds kindof scary to me. But if i was the person whp likes scary i would give it a 9.

[behindTHEmask]

This isn't about being scary. Every person feels differently, and takes pain in at different angles.

Thank you for your rating, I'm glad you gave me some of your time.

[Robin]

It's très emo, dahling.

It is a little scary, like other people have said. I can see this with some Rammstein background noise. Morgenstern or Stein um Stein came to mind when I read your song.

The only thing I'd have to protest about is that this seems a little too emo, although I think that if it wasn't as angsty as it was, your message wouldn't have gotten across. And I shouldn't be complaining about angst anyways, because that's all my stuff is. Uh...yeah.

Anyways, good job.

[conversesneaker]

Beautiful lyrics, heart-breaking almost. I can imagine this to Phantom of the Opera playing in the background.