Confusing!

[lilgreendude]

I'm trapped in a tangled mess
Everything I see
Everything I hear
My heart stops

Chorus
Its all her fualt
but she thinks so different
Iwas nice
she was so mean!
Everything is so confusing

You can say
I'm so rude
But I'm just doing
what she told me to do

Chorus

I scream!
And so do you
You pretend
We tell the truth
Everything ends on your grave

Chorus
Everything is so confusing

[taliesin]

Nice. The spelling needs work, but otherwise, it's nice.

[GreenDay]

Hey, I liked the verses, but honestly I think you could have done better on the chorus. I don't think "nice" and "mean" are great words to use. They make the song seem bland and childish. Just my opinion.