Leave Me!!

[lilgreendude]

I'm not sure its good at all. Soooo....Just HAVE AT IT! LOL!

I stared at the sky
I stared at the ground
You looked at me
Looked at my frown

You said it be okay
Intill yesterday
When everything went wrong

Chorus
I couldn't take the pain
You screamed and hollored at me
Just becuase I made a little mistake
doesn't mean you have to go after me

Look me in the eyes
And tell me its over
I can't stand another day
with you!

Please send me home
leaving our memories behind
Don't let me cry

Chorus
I couldn't take the pain
You screamed and hollored at me
Just becuase I made a little mistake
doesn't mean you have to go after me

Please send me home
leaving our memories behind
Don't let me cry!

[usgeisha]

I think it was really good at the beginning ;D but gradually, i think you lost the flow... so maybe if you edit the end, it'll be outstanding.

~uS*gEiShA~

[Ramona]

AGH.

[darktears]

um..it was alright at the beginning, but the end wasn't that great. Maybe add a little or something and it will be better..