state of confusion

[losersrkewl]

i'm in a state of confusion
i'm lost in time
i keep on losing
it doesn't seem right

sometimes i feel like
i'm in outer space
and everybody thinks
i go at slow pace

i'm in a state of confusion
and i just don't get it
every time i try
it doesn't seem to fit

i'm in a state of confusion
i'm lost in time
i keep on losing
it doesn't seem right.

i try to let people see
who i am
but they all make fun of me
they point and laugh

why do they make fun
i want to be thier friend
but all they do is shun
they won't give me a chance

i'm in a state of confusion
i'm lost in time
i keep on losing
it doesn't seem right

[losersrkewl]

please tell me what you think of it

[Ramona]

Why didn't you tell me you didn't know you could write, dude?

[ciel]

Nice. I like the theme. The refrain, rhyme and rhythm are good too.

"i try to let people see
who i am
but they all make fun of me
they point and laugh"

I feel that.

[Confusion]

ehhhhh.......... i relate to the emotions in this!!!!!!!! and it's called a state of confusion!!!! haha, my name on this is confusion!!!!!!!!! nice job!!!!!!!! it's a realli good song

[darktears]

It's good, I really liked it. I would kinda work on a different ending, I just didn't like it, sorry, otherwise it was awsome!

[Confusion]

i agree.. the ending seems very sudden..