My Frustration

[lilgreendude]

My mind is wondering why it happens
I walk around so mad
Everytime it makes me so sad

I never thought they would fight
but I guess I was just cheating my mind
And this is how it went all togethor

I SCREAMED dearing the night
I listened to them fight
I heard my name and there I was
Stuck in the middle
Trying to speak
The waters surrounding me

They yell about whats unimportant
I try to get them to understand
But nothing works even if I yell at them
They just sit around being FREAKIN mad!

I walk around and then I sit down
Trying to keep my cool
but then I scream at the top of my lungs
being so scared and trying not to be mean

They try to work things out
but they don't understand what
each other is talking about
so I talk and talk
but never an answer becuase this is the way it goes

I SCREAMED dearing the night
I listened to them fight
I heard my name and there I was
Stuck in the middle
Trying to speak
The waters surrounding me

They talk alone
I sit and cry
I ask what they are
talking about
But they just wont tell me

I try to understand
but its just to hard
I am getting mad
and MADDER

We are friends
is what they say
everytime they are not fighting
but to me
we are very lousy

If this could just stop
we could be okay
but everytime
it could probably happen
EVERY DAY!
So this is how it goes...

I SCREAMED dearing the night
I listened to them fight
I heard my name and there I was
Stuck in the middle
Trying to speak
The waters surrounding me

I am SAD!
I am FREAKIN MAD!
She is crying
and the others speeking to me
Maybe I should freak out and scream!

[lilgreendude]

Please tell me what you think of it

[ciel]

I get the frustration in your lyrics. the chorus is powerful for that and the "waters surrounding" takes on a double meaning alothough I don't know if that's how you intended it. I think of it as like either waters as in a storm (emotional) or like drowning or swimming (again emotionally).

Good!

[darktears]

that's really awsome. You can tell that your frustrated. Perfect name. Lol. The chorus really tells alot and is the most emotinail part I think of the song