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Post by poopeh on Oct 17, 2005 14:54:26 GMT -8
Outside it is sunny the weather feels great The person inside me is full of hate When its sunny with the world full of joy Hate bubbles inside me, hate I don’t enjoy
Outside it is rainy the weather is gloomy And the old mad me dies, and out comes the new me Playing outside, soaked by the rain My mad self goes out the drain
As the sun is out I’m full of pain But all that goes away with each drop of rain.
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Post by darktears on Nov 13, 2005 20:07:27 GMT -8
It was good, I think make it longer. At times, I don't know why I felt that the ryhming was kinda forced.
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