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Post by Ramona on Mar 8, 2005 16:21:45 GMT -8
I wrote this back in 7th grade (which was only last year) and I was in my headbanger/cutter thing, which is fine, but I grew out of it. Yeah. -----
I walk among the living,
But I am not alive,
Stand before me, empty child,
Only I allow you to survive,
Cruelly I watch over you,
I watch you become ill,
You struggle, battle for your life,
When it ends is at my will,
Abridged: I am your nightmare’s twist,
The deceit in your smile,
Shadows flitting in the mist,
Your senses I beguile,
You are trained at my hand,
To believe what is not real,
I gently float around your mind,
While your breath I steal,
You cannot get me, you may say,
Put your thinking to the test,
And take a lonely, frigid sleep,
Close your eyes but do not rest,
Keep on glancing towards the sky,
Watch: for I may be nearby.
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Post by kaidanasnan on Mar 8, 2005 16:57:17 GMT -8
I love it, it's awesome.
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Post by Ramona on Mar 8, 2005 17:06:58 GMT -8
Spank you very much.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 8, 2005 23:17:52 GMT -8
really creepy. i loved it.
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Post by Ramona on Mar 9, 2005 18:28:00 GMT -8
Thanks a lot.
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Post by dominicmonaghan on Mar 9, 2005 19:24:23 GMT -8
wow, very cool  |
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Post by Ramona on Mar 10, 2005 15:35:55 GMT -8
Again, thank you, to all my fans...*gets worked up and starts to make speech* I just wanna thank all the little people I had to step on to get this award, you like me! You really LIKE me! Naw, just kidding, it was slightly funny at the time, though.
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Post by frontpagenews on Mar 11, 2005 13:48:31 GMT -8
It totally rocked my socks...very hmm i dont have a good word right now. But you get the point right? Rythm kind wobbles only slightly in a few spots, but other than that tres bien!
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Post by Ramona on Mar 12, 2005 12:57:40 GMT -8
Spanks.
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