my sushi blueboy

Pseudomuse
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We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer.

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my sushi blueboy Jun 2, 2005 20:22:59 GMT -8

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Post by Pseudomuse on Jun 2, 2005 20:22:59 GMT -8

look I have a new name and a new avatar! W00T!
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when i think of you. i think of you in shades of pink and blue. 
electricblueblondeboy full of waterwishes and half cocked smiles 
(similes) and rosy lips cracked and soft skin tanned in the sun.

today you resemble your sushi. raw, simple. and it slips past your lips.

les mots that cover green workbooks de francais are littered scribbles of travaille de bébés

and to tease with the ease of the devil is a gift. 

something about your laugh or your infinite 
reservoir of arrogance: such a cocksure
draws people to you
	seemingly like moths to the flame
	even though no one gets burned
	you still hold that enticing, exciting mystery
but cool calm blue reason is
something of a balm
that coats your speech

when i think of you. i think of you in shades of pink and blue. 
rosesaltelectricblue.
sushiblue.
a hint of beryl in the moments where laughter is the commoncoldcure for everything left behind.

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Last Edit: Jun 2, 2005 20:24:32 GMT -8 by Pseudomuse

You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion"

I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way.

If you want to call me that, smile.

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	my sushi blueboy Jun 2, 2005 21:45:29 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 2, 2005 21:45:29 GMT -8 i don't know. i really can't concentrate when it's in this form. i couldn't really follow it. and thank you for commenting!!!!
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	my sushi blueboy Jun 3, 2005 0:36:48 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Jun 3, 2005 0:36:48 GMT -8 i think this is great!!!!! it's realli different and descriptive! i think maybe it ends a bit suddenly, perhaps another line or so would correct that?
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

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