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Re: The Crack Of Thin Ice (chapter 1) Jan 18, 2005 12:54:49 GMT -8

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Post by dragon6xx on Jan 18, 2005 12:54:49 GMT -8

That's really good! I don't think your new style is horrendus! I just don't really have the storyline yet. If i picked it up off of the shelf and read this though I'd definently read the whole thing. Just one question: Are they talking to each other, or more like thinking?

quilleh Guest	Re: The Crack Of Thin Ice (chapter 1) Jan 18, 2005 14:19:25 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by quilleh on Jan 18, 2005 14:19:25 GMT -8 _{I can meerly state, that at present, I am utterly bewieldered by all the confusion. Scratches head}

junipercayenne Guest	Re: The Crack Of Thin Ice (chapter 1) Mar 5, 2005 13:04:19 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by junipercayenne on Mar 5, 2005 13:04:19 GMT -8 Just read through that, gosh, I CAN'T EVEN ANSWER THAT QUESTION! That was confusing. Forget it.