Walls of Marshmallowy Goodness

[quilleh]

<sub>Hammer the thoughts into my head; its what you want me to think.
I won’t agree to this, putting my creativity to shame.
Do you think I don’t know?
I’m not stupid…No, no, no. Not stupid.
Just crazy.
Just mad enough in fact.
You’re in for it now…
I’ll resist your attitude; I’ll take on my own.
Violence in the systems, it’s the government way.
Just don’t do something you’ll regret.
No regrets.
Just regal enough for show.

Empty echoes play off the walls,
In the asylum of my mind.
I've been driven mad, as I've worn my jacket.
The straight jacket that holds my judgment,
So what if I'm insane?
I don't want to be like you, and you don't deserve to be me.
You can't handle it. I know you can't...

This place is a prison; most people aren’t your friends.
Reach for your higher purpose, you’ll take on a role.
Roleplaying games, they’re our masks.
People can’t cut away at those;
They just can’t take the truth.
No Truth.
Just lying on the surface.
No one sees the real you, it’s implausibly corrupt.
Can you relate? Can you identify?
I think you can, I know you will.
Don’t wait until it’s too late.
No reality.
Just masking all you are.

Empty echoes play off the walls,
In the asylum of my mind.
I've been driven mad, as I've worn my jacket.
The straight jacket that holds my judgment,
So what if I'm insane?
I don't want to be like you, and you don't deserve to be me.
You can't handle it. I know you can't...


Acidic memories burning into my brain, I can’t find my way out.
I need the help of something better to escape my demons.
Escape the demons of this world, out-running.
Take away my fears, a cry for help.
I need the daylight.
Shadow falls.
Just drowning in my demons.
These defences grow larger, with every sin I commit.
Help me… now.
Save me.
Pause my long distance run-around.
No help.
Just falling deeper still.

Empty echoes play off the walls,
In the asylum of my mind.
I've been driven mad, as I've worn my jacket.
The straight jacket that holds my judgment,
So what if I'm insane?
I don't want to be like you, and you don't deserve to be me.
You can't handle it. I know you can't...

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HELP?</sub>

[Ramona]

I would help, but I'm not good at free verse, used to be, but not anymore.

[quilleh]

_{Well, fanks for considering. XD I just feel unsure of how to end this.}

[Sparks]

I read it, and I really like it.
I'm listening to music right now so I don't know if I absorbed it all, but I thought it ran very smoothly for free-verse.
Well put-together.
Kudos

[quilleh]

_{Thank you. I like the idea of "the asylum of my mind", but I need to close with something...riveting.}

[behindTHEmask]

^{I'm not sure how you can end it, but whatever it is, I bet it will be awesome. I really like it. A lot.}

[quilleh]

_{Fanks. ^_^ I'll think about it.}