Breathing Mementos

[behindTHEmask]

<sup>Breathing Mementos

It’s breathing—<br>Pulsating, inside my head.
Your ripped out heart,
Has a deafening scream,
With a musical touch.

Your blood shaded scarlet,
Scatters across the pavement,
As a memento of the drive,
Given from you to me,
When we dreamt together.

I’m lying on the black,
By your side,
Forcing you to engrave,
Yourself into my soul,
So I can breath with you.

The moment stops on the hour,
Pauses at the minute,
Rewinds to the day,
And I play the picture over.

You scream murder,
And I cry relentless bombs,
That wreak havoc,
On the broken ties,
That cannot be mended.

I’m left in silence,
Parted from my beloved you,
Spewing droplets,
Of my broken heart,
Over you lifeless body.

I live for the sake of nothing,
And you’re dead,
Because I couldn’t push,
Your body against mine,
In time to save you.

It’s too hard to say goodbye,
So spend forever with me,
Come back,
So we can relive the moment,
Because we know it is our last.</sup>

[saralioness]

I didn't really understand it, but the choppy flow of it reminded me of a song. It was good, though.

[behindTHEmask]

Actually, as I read it over, I really hate it. It's too. . .I dunno. It's really crap.

But thanks for commenting.

[Queen of Rain]

I like it.. the rhythm needs to be worked on, and also the imagery.. but its such a beautiful pain described..

[behindTHEmask]

Hmm, I edited it because I'm trying to distract myself from things.