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Guilty
Mar 21, 2005 21:34:01 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 21, 2005 21:34:01 GMT -8
Lol, thanks....Yeah, it's very hard to tell about the song, acauttly, every song, if you don't hear the tune, it's harder to understand.
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Guilty
Mar 20, 2005 19:49:41 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 20, 2005 19:49:41 GMT -8
I always knew the answer to your question. I always could say what you wanted to hear. Now it's different, you left me standing alone Like, How I'm always waiting for you to come get me.
I'm crying by myself. I'm living all alone. I never really knew how much it hurt, to be loved by somebody you knew.
You were playing a game. I came in last. I knew it wasn't right, to leave out on the streets.
I know better now, I know something ain't right. But, hey, I don't feel the same way.
*Chorus* You made me cry, you made me love I don't know what to do without you. All I know is, your not who I thought you were. I used to die, I used to cry, but now I hold my head up high. You made me once again, remember who I was, You made me feel guilty.
It was so cold outside, by the window. And the fire burned without you. All I know is, I will survive, I will survive Even without you
I never used to think when I was with you, I never you used to care. All I knew was, I didn't want to leave. I didn't want to be deceived.
I think I was, I know I was, You made me act like a fool. I never knew, I want to get away from you.
*Chorus* You made me cry, you made me love I don't know what to do without you. All I know is, your not who I thought you were. I used to die, I used to cry, but now I hold my head up high. You made me once again, remember who I was, You made me feel guilty.
All over again. This time it's reversed. I'm turning it around. I hate to let you know.
Your the one, leaving Your the one dieing, Now your turn to be the one who's crying. And I'm the one to make you feel insane.
It's the same game, you played with me, You'll see, it's the way, it's supposed to be.
*Chorus* I made you cry, I made you love You don't know what to do without me. All I know is, your not who I thought you were. I used to die, I used to cry, but now I hold my head up high. I made you once again, remember who I was, I made you feel guilty, for putting me in danger.
Now your the one, who needs to listen. Your going try to remember me. Not that I'm, such a bad person. I just want you to feel the way you made me feel. You'll feel guilty. You will feel guilty.
I used to die, I used to cry, but now I hold my head up high. I made you once again, remember who I was, I made you feel guilty. Yeah, I made you feel guilty.
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Post by darktears on Mar 10, 2005 20:30:12 GMT -8
Nice song...it was very rocky...I think, I would love to hear this with a melody and beat and stuff.
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Post by darktears on Apr 27, 2005 19:05:58 GMT -8
Awe, thanks everyone. It makes me feel really good, that you accuattly came back and read the song again, because you liked it that much!! Thank you!
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Post by darktears on Apr 21, 2005 17:02:26 GMT -8
Thank you all, so very much. I've never heard anyone say such nice things about my writing before. Thank you very much, I appreciate it.
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Post by darktears on Mar 7, 2005 19:31:03 GMT -8
Sorry, I was in the french mood, lol
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Post by darktears on Feb 27, 2005 10:18:50 GMT -8
MERCI!!
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Post by darktears on Feb 6, 2005 17:15:50 GMT -8
wow, thanks. I showed it to my friend to and he thought it was good. It was kinda something I thought of on the spot, so I didn't know if it was that great or not. From your reply I think it's better then I thought. Thanks alot.
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Post by darktears on Feb 1, 2005 19:57:06 GMT -8
Don't you feel it When your mind starts to wonder She's still standing there Underneath the thunder
The room is moving It's really spinning She can't stop thinking Of when you were just kidding
She can feel the heart beats She can feel your lies Buried far beneath you Lost in your eyes
*chorus*
Don't you know she's still there Still calling out to you She wants to feel you there She wants to be there with you, too Can't you tell she's not invisible? Can't you tell she loves you?
The hurt inside their voices The love inside their heart You seem to think you know them But you don't know they're hurt
You seem to love their words The way they express theirselves But you never seem to care What it's all about.
Just look deep inside
*chorus*x2
Don't you know she's still there Still calling out to you She wants to feel you there She wants to be there with you, too Can't you tell she's not invisible? Can't you tell she loves you?
Oh, can't you tell she loves you?
She needs to know your there She needs to know you care Just want to let you know She won't go.
*chorus*
Don't you know she's still there Still calling out to you She wants to feel you there She wants to be there with you, too Can't you tell she's not invisible? Can't you tell she loves you?
She is still there She's still calling out to you Feel you there Be there with you Can't you tell she's not invisible? Can't you tell she loves you?
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Post by darktears on Feb 27, 2005 10:38:52 GMT -8
i have more then one fav...pop rok, some country (gretchen wiilson) and some rap
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Denial
Mar 13, 2005 19:57:22 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 13, 2005 19:57:22 GMT -8
Yay for me?? Lol, since when have you said that?? Lol, well thanks, I appreciate it guys...
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Denial
Mar 13, 2005 18:20:59 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 13, 2005 18:20:59 GMT -8
Omg, thank you sooooo much. I can't beleive you said that, I'm so suprised...Lol, Thank you lots.
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Denial
Mar 11, 2005 15:57:10 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 11, 2005 15:57:10 GMT -8
You loved me, you cared. You tryed to tell me everything. We were honest, we shared. Now your gone, left me alone on the other side of the world.
You never cryed, you never tried to do anything. You left me in the dust, to hang out with your friends. So I talked, and I yelled, I tried to get to know you, but instead of talking, you just walked right past me.
*chorus*
Your living in denial. You really just love her. What you don't realize is, your the one getting hurt. You cry for her, you buy for her. But she don't really care. Your living in the denial.... that we had
Open up your eyes...open up your ears. She's laughing at you, you know she is. You seem to ignore it, but when I look at you. Tears well in your eyes, and you seem to realize. Oh, she's not made for you....
*chorus*x2
Your living in denial. You really just love her. What you don't realize is, your the one getting hurt. You cry for her, you buy for her. But she don't really care. Your living in the denial.... that we had
So try to look beyond me. Try to look beyond her. You really know the truth. You just don't dare to let it sink in.
What you don't know, can't hurt you though. You must know alot, because she's torn you, your hearts an empty hole. Won't you just look, won't you just try, please don't, please don't lie....to me.....
*chorus*
Your living in denial. You really just love her. What you don't realize is, your the one getting hurt. You cry for her, you buy for her. But she don't really care. Your living in the denial....
Your living in denial. You really just love her. What you don't realize is, your the one getting hurt. You cry for her, you buy for her. But she don't really care. Your living in the denial.... that we had
that we had...now it's gone, but it's back to get you. In denial, you love her, she don't love you back. In the denial that we had....
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Post by darktears on Mar 10, 2005 20:37:05 GMT -8
Your a nuce writer. The things that I have read by you are very well written and...what's the word....sorry my brain isn't working right now...um..oh yea expressed...nice job
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Don't
Mar 10, 2005 20:23:32 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Mar 10, 2005 20:23:32 GMT -8
Answer me, silently Quietly, oh yea. One afraid, now alive It's all crazy.
Once again, question me Feel it, falling. Dieing, Trying. All together once again. Keep it close to you now, man.
*chorus* Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
You can try, you can lie, you can wonder How it feels when you live underneath the pressure. The private eye, weird guys falling for you... You never know, where to go 'till you fall. Flat on your face, in the case when you are surrounded.
You know why you cannot breath. Your into deep.
*chorus*x2 Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
All your worries seem to melt All your troubles they have left. And your mind it starts to think Why you cannot be here with it all.
*chorus*x3 Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
Don't forget.... Don't forget.... Don't forget you- you are beautiful.
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