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I Burn
Sept 2, 2005 15:26:43 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Sept 2, 2005 15:26:43 GMT -8
“I burn, I pine, I perish . . ." Act I, Scene I, "The Taming of the Shrew" by William Shakespeare
I burn fire heat flames lick along my skin an inferno engulfs my soul and I'm burning going up in smoke blazing with how I need you it’s like a match to gasoline not romantic instant and natural primitive my heart blazes God, how I need you
I pine throb pulse frantic for your deep voice sends shivers rippling through me the pretty words you don’t give are nothing compared to what you do when you touch me shaking in my passion undone with one stroke of your hands on my hair what kind of power am I giving you? stupid and yet my soul sizzles God, how I want you
I perish dying antagonizing you hold all of me and when you’re gone how do I live without myself? aching for your touch I'm hurting with the want of looking into your burning eyes where I can see someone sensual worthwhile the best you ever had my body burns God, how I love you
by ScarletMornings
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I Burn
Sept 5, 2005 20:23:39 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 5, 2005 20:23:39 GMT -8
YESSSSS!! THREE BABY!!!! I'm SOOOOOOOOO EXCITED!! AHHHHHH!!!!
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I Burn
Sept 7, 2005 9:07:43 GMT -8
Post by Confusion on Sept 7, 2005 9:07:43 GMT -8
wow! amazing...... just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I Burn
Oct 23, 2005 14:11:58 GMT -8
Post by writingfool73 on Oct 23, 2005 14:11:58 GMT -8
wow that was amazing I loved it
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I Burn
Oct 26, 2005 19:59:27 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Oct 26, 2005 19:59:27 GMT -8
thank you so much!
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I Burn
Nov 2, 2005 19:31:53 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 2, 2005 19:31:53 GMT -8
That was so great. I thought it had so much detail and emoticion in it. I just loved it, it took my breath away! Nice job!
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