weak.

[cry,crayola.]

rip me apart, world.
you've thrown all you can at me,
and i've dodged every blow,

up until now.

so we'll walk ten paces,
turn, and shoot.
and i'll prove to you.
i can take it.

out in the battlefield,
with a bucket over my head
and a broomstick as my sword,
i'll come out swinging.
don't let my looks deceive you.

i'm tough; you'll see.
you've taken my soul, world.
and i'm here to fight for it.

[ScarletMornings]

i like this. simple, but powerful. great diction, i enjoyed!