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cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	slumber. Sept 23, 2007 6:18:58 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Sept 23, 2007 6:18:58 GMT -8 so lets share that wand-tipped sky and cast wishes as they soar oh, the graceful things i see.
	Last Edit: Sept 23, 2007 6:19:23 GMT -8 by cry,crayola. hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	slumber. Oct 1, 2007 18:57:49 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Oct 1, 2007 18:57:49 GMT -8 I like the brevity. "Wand-tipped" is fantastic. But "graceful" seems out of place to me...perhaps too...elegant?
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	slumber. Oct 2, 2007 1:59:19 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Oct 2, 2007 1:59:19 GMT -8 hm. what if i changed it to something like "midnight" or "starlight" still too elegant?
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.