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Aug 17, 2007 15:15:00 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Aug 17, 2007 15:15:00 GMT -8
Inspired by yet another rider of the GET bus, though I thought none of this when I saw him, aside from the fact that I swear he had the sweetest face that I've ever seen.
----- run my fingertips along the lines that frame your mouth as precise as they are ambiguous you must've always smiled this way but what is it that made you smile?
you place my hands upon your eyes i feel the lashes brush against my palms a gesture as insane as it is beautiful
you place your feet on either side of mine but the mood changes and i place mine on either side of yours
i feel your breath on my ear just your exhalation with nothing hidden in it's simplicity but the thought of it is so complex
hands upon hands and hearts held in between you have the sweetest face that i've ever seen
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Aug 23, 2007 19:55:10 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Aug 23, 2007 19:55:10 GMT -8
i love this. it was simple. and it was beautiful. it was just a tangible feeling that relatable. so very relatable. my fave part: i feel your breath on my ear just your exhalation with nothing hidden in it's simplicity but the thought of it is so complex
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Man
Aug 25, 2007 16:21:14 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Aug 25, 2007 16:21:14 GMT -8
Thank you so much
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Man
Aug 27, 2007 19:00:21 GMT -8
Post by cry,crayola. on Aug 27, 2007 19:00:21 GMT -8
the emotion put into this is great. you can just feel it and see it all there unfolding before you. like you're actually the one with the infatuation, examining it all.
"a gesture as insane as it is beautiful"
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