The effort

[Queen of Rain]

Crisp is the morning
alas my white sheets
catching the morning sun
- Good work

No one can ever tell
bloodstains


stained

One day they shall see
in winther
there will be
No white clouds form your mouth
no more

they have taken
us both

stained

[ScarletMornings]

unusual, i liked it and the imagery. its simplicity is wonderful to demostrate the stark contrast between the white and the bloodstains and the sun on them. however, i think you could use different words that would make more impact while retaining its shortness. some of these words seem just like filler words. does that make sense? anywho, i really liked it! good work, as always.

[cry,crayola.]

i'm not as sure about this one. the wording wasn't as captivating. it just kind of made it flow over. i like the idea though. it just feels like something is missing. like it's not complete.