Post by Ramona on Oct 10, 2005 8:35:06 GMT -8
I think it still needs some editting but I'm pretty happy with this rough draft of it. I made it like I'm thinking, like at the beginning I feel bad, but then I'm beginning to get OK with the situation, but at the end it's just a relapse to the comfort of an old crush. So, any comments are reaaly really appreciated, since I haven't really looked over it as a whole because the bell for third period is going to read and it's a bad habit of mine anyway.
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look at you
with your chocolatebrowneyes
looking at her
not looking at me
smiling at you
with your crookedteethsmile
but you're smiling at her
not smiling at me
and I know I shouldn't feel betrayed
but I do
and I can't help it
I know I shouldn't feel relieved
but I do
and I can't help it
I used to know you
and I knew your broken heart
I knew how my hands wanted to
pick up the pieces
to make something new
pick it apart and try it again
this time
I need your hands to fix me
but you were never really broken
just like you and I
were never really
'youandI'
really you should love her
like I never had the chance to
love you
I never loved you though
and I don't think I ever could
at least I never wanted to
not that way
so I guess that part is alright
since I don't really want/need it
I can find someone new
he'll have whisperedsmiles
he'll have mismatched laughter
he'll have everythingyoudidn't
and I'll like him like he was you
and maybe he could be
