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Post by behindTHEmask on Oct 2, 2005 19:22:58 GMT -8
Death Will Defeat Us All.
The inevitable is failure, so etch your sins away through the frequent injections and the sweet smell of pain.
There’s error in the way we live being told success in what we do is just around the corner somehow waiting to catch up.
Our lives are lived by being told nothing will be able to stand in our way. Convincing ourselves as we lay awake that they’re right.
The inevitable is failure because no matter how hard we try and no matter how many times we pick ourselves back up, death will always be victorious.
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Post by Ramona on Oct 4, 2005 8:01:08 GMT -8
I like it, it's gloomy, but true. Very nice use of imagery. "Convincing ourselves as we lay awake/ that they're right." Beautiful, I feel that.
Ramona
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Post by Queen of Rain on Oct 4, 2005 23:53:12 GMT -8
diferent and interesting, very true without being melodramic, amazing... beautiful diction in the beginning
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Post by behindTHEmask on Oct 6, 2005 18:40:49 GMT -8
Thank you, very much. ♥
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