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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 29, 2005 19:28:07 GMT -8
don't know, inspired by the first line of song, what do you think of it and the title?? I'm not sure?
Light of my world stepped down into darkness what do you do when the pedestal’s gone? so long to my sweet dreams of everything I ever thought to be gone with one false step or was it intentional? I never knew with you
Funny how the higher you are the harder you fall and if you fell, I guess, you decided I was going down, too with you waving goodbye to my life as I tumbled head over heels, straight into the void you left, as carelessly as I fell for you stupid but such a heady rush
But as I hit the bottom and there’s no sign of you in the darkness my eyes glaze and I shudder the light you took the light with you when my love gave you wings your salvation was my downfall literally
But I would do it again love is flight sometimes you tumble sometimes you soar but it’s always worth the jump the adrenaline in your blood because if you don’t fall into the darkness you ascend into the light the glorious bursts and rays you find sunshine in your life
But if your fledgling wings don’t work and they bend buckle under the weight of your heart then damn the landing sure hurts especially in the dark
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Post by Ramona on Sept 30, 2005 7:30:33 GMT -8
SCHWEET! I like this so much. It has a magnificent ending stanza and the imagery is just awesome.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Oct 5, 2005 14:34:45 GMT -8
nudging.
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Post by laura on Oct 6, 2005 12:43:24 GMT -8
Good! I like; very well-writ "then damn the landing sure hurts" is funny.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Oct 9, 2005 17:24:58 GMT -8
i'm glad. i wasn't sure if that part would sound right, but i really wanted to add it in.
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