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For You, I Am Sept 28, 2005 16:17:33 GMT -8

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Post by Ramona on Sept 28, 2005 16:17:33 GMT -8

Also something I wrote yesterday.

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What if you wrote a poem for me?
Told me your feelings written in words

I don’t know you anymore
Your eyes are closed
And your soul blocked off
With the built-up piles of
All the things
You did without me

What if you wrote a poem for me?
I wish you had
I wish you would

I never saw you until now
Now that you’re only a splinter
Of thought needling
My eyes
Cut my laughter into
Bits of dirty song

What if you wrote a poem for me?

I guess this one’s for you.

Last Edit: Sept 28, 2005 16:18:37 GMT -8 by Ramona

"Hold my head inside your hands.
I need someone who understands.
I need someone, someone who hears.
For you I've waited all these years.

For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come,
Until my day, my day is done.
And say you'll come and set me free.
Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	For You, I Am Sept 29, 2005 18:49:18 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 29, 2005 18:49:18 GMT -8 wow. i loooooove this. very amazing idea. i like it TOOOOONS!!
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	For You, I Am Sept 30, 2005 7:28:44 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Sept 30, 2005 7:28:44 GMT -8 Thank you. I love comments, they make me oh so happy, to the point of delirium, as a matter of fact.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	For You, I Am Oct 1, 2005 7:45:45 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Oct 1, 2005 7:45:45 GMT -8 its different and emotional. sometimes it gets too shallow (end of thrid stanza) but its made up for by great rhythm
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	For You, I Am Oct 4, 2005 8:16:22 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Oct 4, 2005 8:16:22 GMT -8 Thanks. Constructive criticism makes me smile. Ramona
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

tpadancinbabie00 Guest	For You, I Am Nov 5, 2005 23:56:53 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by tpadancinbabie00 on Nov 5, 2005 23:56:53 GMT -8 hey i like this one!! its awesome!!! i like how its different!!! ;D

lelandluver4eva Guest	For You, I Am Nov 6, 2005 20:11:05 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 6, 2005 20:11:05 GMT -8 its phenomenal

Post by Ramona on Sept 28, 2005 16:17:33 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 29, 2005 18:49:18 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Sept 30, 2005 7:28:44 GMT -8

Post by Queen of Rain on Oct 1, 2005 7:45:45 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Oct 4, 2005 8:16:22 GMT -8

Post by tpadancinbabie00 on Nov 5, 2005 23:56:53 GMT -8

Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 6, 2005 20:11:05 GMT -8