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Post by Ramona on Sept 28, 2005 16:16:10 GMT -8
Yeah, something I wrote yesterday. ----- You’re going to fall off The edge of the world Unless you believe it’s Not there
Show me the light That opens the Darkness I see it But I want to make sure You do, too
After the rain The whole world is mudluscious So wet So sweet So nice
And yes, the serpents Wait at the end They whisper They simper They preen Just for you
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 29, 2005 18:48:12 GMT -8
very unusual and different, i like it.
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Post by Ramona on Sept 30, 2005 7:37:58 GMT -8
Thankies!
Ramona
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Post by Queen of Rain on Oct 6, 2005 9:29:53 GMT -8
Omg this is just amazing, so poetic and unique! There is sth weird about the 1st stanza, liek rhythm in the second line, but i realyl adore the 3rd stanza!! It carries the intense magic of DH Lawrence!! I love it
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