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Post by Ramona on Sept 27, 2005 8:00:36 GMT -8
Yet another second period creation. ----- first rain yesterday the water that falls is the same water that graced the earth years ago
first love yesterday the emotions we know are the same emotions that graced the earth years ago
first smile yesterday the people we know are different from the one that knew the earth years ago
Whoa, started out with a totally different idea for this one, but it came out different. Way different.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 27, 2005 20:42:16 GMT -8
omg, i love this. it's soo simplistic, but this stuff i think about sometimes. i think it's "deceptiveley" simple, but actual shows a complex idea. very beautiful, in my opinion.
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Post by Ramona on Sept 28, 2005 7:53:15 GMT -8
Thank you. I didn't actually mean for it to come out like that, I meant to have a poem about rain, but then it kind of took a different path.
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