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Post by Ramona on Sept 22, 2005 8:15:30 GMT -8
Inspired by a full moon and a sky of stars. It's meant to be kind of ambiguous and universal. Who doesn't look at the stars? -----
God,
it feels good
nice to be released
because
sometimes you don't need
to think
to talk
to feel
just
to be
Caught in the bittersweet surrender
of being there
being alive
but not being a part of things
just
being
just
look
up
at the stars
the wallpaper of the universe
it has holes punched in it
it's bigger than you
it's bigger than me
there has to be something other
other
be still
fall up
up into the never-ending
just be
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 22, 2005 17:00:44 GMT -8
wow. i really really love this. it is very emotional to me and deep, and i feel included in it, because i know what you're talking about. fantastic.
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Post by Queen of Rain on Sept 23, 2005 8:21:42 GMT -8
wow im so impressed how you couild combine an emotional deeper meaning to such a great observations.. it shows your strengths and maturity (or matureness or whatever that word is) as a poet
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Post by Ramona on Sept 26, 2005 8:12:15 GMT -8
Thanks  Ramona |
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 26, 2005 15:50:40 GMT -8
i just love rereading this. it's beautiful and soothing to me.
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Post by Ramona on Sept 28, 2005 7:59:17 GMT -8
Really? That's so cool. Did you know if you stare up at the nght sky long enough and erase everything else, you get the weirdest levitating feeling? It's awesome. That' where the falling up thing comes from.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 29, 2005 18:55:37 GMT -8
yeah, i try not to stare to long at the sky cuz i get the strangest feeling of being nothing, like tiny and insignificant.
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Post by Ramona on Sept 30, 2005 7:31:59 GMT -8
Yeah, that's how I feel, too, it's just like you feel that the world is weighing on your shoulders because your parents yelled at you or something, but then you realize there's this HUMONGOUSLY vast ABYSS out there, and there could be anything in it.
Ramona
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