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Post by cry,crayola. on Sept 20, 2005 17:56:04 GMT -8
the walls my cell captured forever in my palace no! my prison the love, the want long gone but yet walls still stay my prison remains the walls shine golden in the sun long and flowing in the wind amazing different wonderful no! i must not fall in temptation these walls are my pain but, oh! his hair, his long golden hair beckons me to touch it to hold it to watch it flow in the wind i am captured. never to leave my cell walls someday the walls will fall, though with these scissors in my hand i think, "he can't seduce me forever. everyone must sleep"
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Post by cry,crayola. on Sept 20, 2005 17:58:45 GMT -8
suggestions, anybody? i wanna do something to the end, but i don't know what!!!!
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Post by ScarletMornings on Sept 20, 2005 21:18:10 GMT -8
oooo. fantastic idea. i don't know what it needs, but it could probably have a little more clarity. it seems somewhat vague?
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