T.V Script

[darktears]

||This is my first poem, hopefully not the last. So please, go east, lol||

When you look into the eyes of them.

They seem so happy and alive,

but you know that deep down, down inside,

They seem just about to die.

Talk to them and see their smile,

feeling up the world.

But when you leave they turn to face.

The darkness inside that hurts.

You seem to think you know their life,

but once you start to think you realize.

Their life is like a t.v script just waiting be revived

[midnightwhitewolf]

Wow, This is good work, Keep it up, I'm sure you will.

[frontpagenews]

Ooh I loved it especially for the fact that it is you first poem. I mean that makes it awsome. I loved the lines "You seem to think you know their life,

but once you start to think you realize.

Their life is like a t.v script just waiting be revived"

they are beautiful. Maybe work on the rythm a bit and itll be gold. Nice work for your first time

[darktears]

Thank you very much. I enjoy getting compliments, but doesn't everyone?? Lol, well thank you so much.