Untitled, NEEDS HELP.

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Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 15:42:15 GMT -8

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Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 15:42:15 GMT -8

_{UNTITLED
Under Construction

The ceiling paint peels-
My cracking recollections,
Of your timeless existence.
Against my pillow rustles,
The piecing of your days,
You left me here to die,
One my own again,
Just when I considered,
“There’s something here worthwhile.”<br>You leave me with remorse.
The emptiness is here,
Flaking away at the roof overhead.}

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 15:53:47 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 15:53:47 GMT -8 blinks what do you need help with? that kicks the butt right there of anything i have. if you want my opinion, you could leave it like that and it would rock on to infinite. Amazing job. so far, i guess.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

quilleh Guest	Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 15:59:23 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 15:59:23 GMT -8 _{Aww; so nice! Thanks, but your work is very good also. I enjoy reading it, and in fact, I'm off to right...about, now.}

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 16:03:29 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 16:03:29 GMT -8 well, thank you.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

quilleh Guest	Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 18:11:15 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 18:11:15 GMT -8 _{Aww, nu problem.}

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Untitled, NEEDS HELP. Jan 27, 2005 19:25:32 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 19:25:32 GMT -8 I love the word awww.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 15:42:15 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 15:53:47 GMT -8

Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 15:59:23 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 16:03:29 GMT -8

Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 18:11:15 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 19:25:32 GMT -8