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Hollow
Jan 26, 2005 21:45:54 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 26, 2005 21:45:54 GMT -8
I get the suspicious feeling I posted this before, but I can't figure out where, so i'll post it again, and if you have read it, will you tell me what you think again?
I am lost in the night, humbled and weeping dry ice tears.
My breath confined to my throat without your forgiveness. And I'm lost in this hollow place deep inside.
The path that I followed, pride, the one that led away from you, led to my crash, for pride goeth before a fall.
Now I count to eternity, without you, as my heart stares at me with vacuous eyes.
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:01:38 GMT -8
Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 16:01:38 GMT -8
*Applauds* Very nice! "Dry ice tears"...never would of thought o' that. Sweetness all the way.
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:05:07 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 16:05:07 GMT -8
Aww, thanks! I feel all bubbly. ;D (<- that's my silly, happy little grin)
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:07:32 GMT -8
Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 16:07:32 GMT -8
That line definitly deserves recognition, and therefore, I'm recognizing it. Yay, nu problem.
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:10:27 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 16:10:27 GMT -8
thanks, i think god was like "oh she needs a cool phrase" and then he like beamed it down to me and it popped in my head and i went "oh that's cool"
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:17:05 GMT -8
Post by quilleh on Jan 27, 2005 16:17:05 GMT -8
*Beams* Yay for God and his uber-good phrases!
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Hollow
Jan 27, 2005 16:19:37 GMT -8
Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 27, 2005 16:19:37 GMT -8
i love the word beam. it just makes me wanna giggle.
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