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louise Guest	The Player Piano Feb 27, 2005 8:58:59 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by louise on Feb 27, 2005 8:58:59 GMT -8 I like it. It is surrealistic (somethong I always like) but still it captures emotions. I also like the comments between the lines. It is great....

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The Player Piano Mar 2, 2005 19:28:29 GMT -8

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Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 2, 2005 19:28:29 GMT -8

oooooh getting into metaphyiscal poetry I see. Fantastic. Wow...you left me pratically speachless. Every line was so so perfect.

here's my favorite lines are these

Believe in the sunset; emaciated sunrise
Plastic supernova.
When he blinks we are exposed to a material world
They tell him to keep playing
(We are alive in here.)
Because what they are really saying
Is shut up my lovely and don’t worry about a thing
Play on, and play on
Sing for me.

Lurf PM

You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion"

I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way.

If you want to call me that, smile.

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

frontpagenews Guest	The Player Piano Mar 4, 2005 17:51:35 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by frontpagenews on Mar 4, 2005 17:51:35 GMT -8 Oh man. C'est tres bien!!!! I love the image it paints for me. Its wonderful.

Sparks Almost Senior Writer With Love, The Underground. Posts: 301	The Player Piano Mar 6, 2005 17:41:33 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sparks on Mar 6, 2005 17:41:33 GMT -8 Thanks so much for the comments
	Big A, Little a, bouncing B. The system might have got you but it won't get me.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	The Player Piano Mar 7, 2005 20:51:15 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 7, 2005 20:51:15 GMT -8 i'm not gonna touch that. except to say, wow. . but i'm not gonna touch that.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Post by louise on Feb 27, 2005 8:58:59 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 2, 2005 19:28:29 GMT -8

Post by frontpagenews on Mar 4, 2005 17:51:35 GMT -8

Post by Sparks on Mar 6, 2005 17:41:33 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 7, 2005 20:51:15 GMT -8