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Post by darktears on Dec 14, 2004 18:57:48 GMT -8
Um, I didn't feel the flow and stuff. Like, I couldn't understand the rythm and stuff. Maybe if you make it a little longer too, that might help.
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Post by Ramona on Mar 6, 2005 16:28:56 GMT -8
The rhythm wasn't consisten, and tehre was no definite meter, which generally doesn't make for a very good song. I do like the concept and teh beginning, though. It just kind of gets downhill from the chorus. It's also a catchy title, kudos for that.
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