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[Confusion]

** Just quickly wrote this down... not at all finished yet, i think what i have got here is the 1st and last stanzas, please let me know what you think and any suggestions for the other stanzas would be greatly appreciated!**

Don't ever think
Too much
For i pity the thinker who possibly could
Think this away

Forget woe, past love
Come: hide from life with me
You are mine
I am yours
Now: hold my hand
Let's forget the world

[ScarletMornings]

well i really really like this. i think it's a great first stanza, but i don't know if that's a good last stanza. it sounds more like a middle stanza, not quite strong enough to be a ending stanza. idk what you could do other than these two, just make up something i guess! lol