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Queen of Rain
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I'm Swedish, that should explain it all..

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She Jul 17, 2005 1:25:56 GMT -8

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Post by Queen of Rain on Jul 17, 2005 1:25:56 GMT -8

Every breath she took
Was a wonder to his world

And his world was never so close
to disintegration
As when he thought
to himself
her silence meant grief

He suffers in silence
a silence that grows
as She doesn't want
to disturb it

When will illusions of man
turn to dust?
When will this Adam
realise?

She sees pain
in your eyes
She hears cry
In your laughter
She Touches
the immortalized fear
that lives in your soul

She is, She is, She is
Why are you afraid?

A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	She Jul 17, 2005 6:23:02 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Jul 17, 2005 6:23:02 GMT -8 sweet and simple, nice!!!!!!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	She Aug 2, 2005 19:06:55 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Aug 2, 2005 19:06:55 GMT -8 i like it. in case ur wondering, my computer has been broke, so i've missed all this woonderful poetry. i'll catch up though.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	She Aug 3, 2005 11:06:09 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 3, 2005 11:06:09 GMT -8 great that you like it cos i dont hehe.. feels like i jsut dont get the right message through...
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	She Aug 4, 2005 8:02:32 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Aug 4, 2005 8:02:32 GMT -8 what message were you trying for? and scarletmornings glad your back and catching up!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	She Aug 4, 2005 10:54:37 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 4, 2005 10:54:37 GMT -8 actually just the thing thats in italics.. kinda how one know more than one pretend.. oo i dont know.. this was like two poems i put together.. really.. i jsut wannan say the italics part but it lacks that deep meaning when alone..
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

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She Aug 5, 2005 17:37:29 GMT -8

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Post by ScarletMornings on Aug 5, 2005 17:37:29 GMT -8

i don't know, i think you did a really good job with it. it seems very deep and emotional to me. i liked it a lot., and i did get the idea that she saw what he was trying to hide and maybe was hurt by it? i don't know, but i really liked this one.

"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave,
Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind;
Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave.
I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned."

-- Edna St. Vincent Millay,
from "Dirge Without Music"

Go to the link and read it!

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	She Aug 6, 2005 10:08:01 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Aug 6, 2005 10:08:01 GMT -8 i agree!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	She Aug 7, 2005 12:09:29 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 7, 2005 12:09:29 GMT -8 ok.. i finally found out what to do with this.. it became the breaker of my writers block! under Fiction lies the beginning of my first shortstory for 4 years Marbles...
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	She Aug 8, 2005 1:54:45 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Aug 8, 2005 1:54:45 GMT -8 yay
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Post by Queen of Rain on Jul 17, 2005 1:25:56 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Jul 17, 2005 6:23:02 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Aug 2, 2005 19:06:55 GMT -8

Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 3, 2005 11:06:09 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Aug 4, 2005 8:02:32 GMT -8

Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 4, 2005 10:54:37 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Aug 5, 2005 17:37:29 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Aug 6, 2005 10:08:01 GMT -8

Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 7, 2005 12:09:29 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Aug 8, 2005 1:54:45 GMT -8