Why do you love me?

[Confusion]

Did you know?
Trees bellow
Wistfully bow
Upon your greatness
No, only I knew

Festive carillons ring
Sing and pray
For you
Only you
Lyrics of
‘I love you’

The wind tells
Its fitful tale
A story
It’s true
Why I’m here for
You
Only you
Yours truly

I watch you as
You tread upon
The crackling autumn leaves
Shattering them
Shreds of the dead
Forgotten foliage

My heart
Yet doesn’t it make
Such a breathtaking sound
To break
Leaf after leaf
Upon the ground?

Did you know?
I love you
I always shall
It’s true
No, only I knew

[Confusion]

hmmm....... i just wrote this, just now.... got the idea from garbages song 'why do you love me'

I'm not sure what i think about this yet.... what do all of you guys think about it?

[roxiecheerchika]

Lol....quick little note: I love that garbage song, good taste in music! Back to the poem... I really liked it. I liked the form you wrote it in. The way you set it up to be read. It gave it something and really helped the poem out. I really liked it. Although I would suggest one thing. The 4th stanza...i think it would really make the poem better if you split it into 2 stanza's...the others are about the same size but that one is longer..It kinda seems out of place. Other then that I really like it

[Confusion]

Thanx, yea i agree! ill do that soooon

[roxiecheerchika]

Your welcys... If your looking for a spot to split it...in my opinion the best place would be between "Forgotten Foliage" and "My heart"...thats seems to be a good stopping point...thankies for the help w/ my poems btw! I think this one is brilliant!

[Confusion]

Thanx!!! Your idea was great!

[roxiecheerchika]

your perfectly welcome. This poem is absolutely brilliant! I love it!

[Confusion]

Thanx sooooooooooo so much!!!