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Post by Pseudomuse on May 16, 2005 14:30:23 GMT -8
rambling flyers dolly flings herself from bridges everyday trying to find the truth in words and mementos fates to spend eternity searching for the answer to life even though its at the bottom of the film canister left in the moldy glove compartment carl spends his last dollar on day old liquor and warm beer trying to erase all the memories of nights alone with nothing but his red gaping soul bared for only the stars and the moon to see dora watches the people patter along below from her upstairs apartment waiting for the white knight to carry her away into the blazing sun patrick --so petrified with shady tampered rivulets of blood scathing the inside of the pale pelt of the inner thigh-- scrubs himself clean with a dirty rag trying to salvage his own sanguine smeared skin wondering if he’ll ever stop lying to himself about liaisons in dark always and the way lips feel against his skin and how another’s flesh feels inside peter runs headlong into the brick wall that so resembles sanity and relationship he’s determined to cave it in at it’s base his mother maria so full of grace injects knowledge of ancients and poetry of kismet with the ability of a user the jail cell of repeated historical fact is a cage and people call her addict but she’s so sure she’s normal this addicted to beauty
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Post by Queen of Rain on May 17, 2005 6:49:56 GMT -8
another observation of human tradgedy performed with uttermost control over poetic features... the rhythm emphasies the feelings soo much, i would appreciate some brigning together, like in the title or something to bring an connection between all these people.. but thats just my little ideas..
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