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Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 24, 2005 21:24:53 GMT -8
i'm not sure what I was thinking when I wrote this. I seems a little choppy but I haven't got the brain power to do much with it now so I thought I'd get it out there first.
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Morning Thoughts
The crisp and snowy morning brought back All those memories of long ago Of white satin bows and daffodils Of church yards filled with song and Baby ducks in the far pond But none of them brought back much to warm My frostbit toes No emotions stirred any thing close to an itch And my booted feet crush the tiny snowflakes that land feverishly in my path And I think I see the lake we once skated on
From here I see Death On the far side of the pond Which wasn't there at first For I couldn't see it in the bright light
This is death Remembrances I no longer take pleasure in The feelings that no longer come The knowledge that this stagnant existence is all you'll ever get
It's as if Emily Dickinson sold my heart out to the cheepest bidder And my mind followed That death is a person and no longer idea And all those memories of long ago Rather than give life give a sense of loss
In nature, as She so put it Everything becomes so much clearer
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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 24, 2005 22:30:58 GMT -8
puzzled.. its beautiful, but i cant really follow ur thoughts, but i guess thats the point with earlymorning or latenight poetry...
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