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Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 23, 2005 20:14:27 GMT -8
It’s a Sunday Morning death parade With its monatomic rumblings echoing of the spare walls Drumming against my brain like the all the previews we watched High in the citadel, alone and wild in our intimacy Taking every chance we had to run rapid through life
And I keep thinking you’ll come back And sweep me up in your arms
I see London, I see France…
Torn petals crinkle under my feet There once wine complexion stolen In the moments between “Hello” and “Goodbye”<br>I shuffle them away as I pass into the eternity that once was Careful recorded memories, now everything is such a blur
And I keep thinking you’ll come back And sweep me up in your arms
I see London, I see France…
And I’ve force fed myself so many times I lost all feeling especially in my thumbs As I pick up your foreign cigarettes and half empty scotch bottles That aren’t there, and that smell of sandalwood and fresh dewed grass Is stinging my lips once again
And I keep thinking you’ll come back And sweep me up in your arms
I see everything, we left to chance…
It’s a Sunday Morning death parade drumming in my ear Rumbling with the palpitations of my heart Deafening and sobering all at the same time Grabbing my lifeline, the bottle that always freezes my fingers I seep into the land of drunkenness Slowing slipping away into amber liquidity
I see London, I see France…
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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 24, 2005 12:27:39 GMT -8
this poem is soo alive!! its so comtemporary so direct adn so well painted with such beautiful words that i once again want to kiss ur feet of admiration... it feels like a song actaully... its great
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Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 24, 2005 20:13:35 GMT -8
thank you so much for the review.
I revised it some more too.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Apr 28, 2005 18:02:58 GMT -8
I don't know why i even post to your poems anymore. i can't think of anything new to say in my worship of you. i am your number one fan, i suppose, though that's so cliche. i need to think of a good title if i'm going to humble myself in cult-following. (little scary, huh? don't worry, i am crazy.)
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Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 30, 2005 13:13:11 GMT -8
thank you dear
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Post by ScarletMornings on Apr 30, 2005 18:56:28 GMT -8
I feel like i'm about to be patted on the head. oh well, if anyone can pat me on the head, i guess it's my hero.
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