Without Wings

Queen of Rain
Senior Writer

I'm Swedish, that should explain it all..

Posts: 614

Without Wings Apr 20, 2005 12:23:02 GMT -8

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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 20, 2005 12:23:02 GMT -8

Without Wings

I’m falling for you
Falling falling featherless
And you won’t catch me
- Falling in love

So you walk past splendidly
They gather what once was breathing
(Just Me with feathers all around)
From the floor
Heart splintered
Eyes blinded with your starlight
Crashing in love
Who can say its beautiful?

A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Pseudomuse Senior Writer We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer. Posts: 489	Without Wings Apr 23, 2005 20:38:04 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 23, 2005 20:38:04 GMT -8 so beautiful...so beautiful. I think if you changed "They gather what once was breathing' to 'Then gather what once was breathing' it would work much better. PM
	You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion" I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way. If you want to call me that, smile. Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	Without Wings Apr 24, 2005 10:25:11 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 24, 2005 10:25:11 GMT -8 thank you fopr that excellent idea and for ur nice critiscs..
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 20, 2005 12:23:02 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 23, 2005 20:38:04 GMT -8

Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 24, 2005 10:25:11 GMT -8