Where do leaves go in winter? (could be repost)

[Queen of Rain]

Where do leaves go in winter?
They fall like angels
But where do feelings go
When lovers are parted?
(We do not know)

A Sunday morning we asked this
Yet the only answer available
Was a bird flying higher and higher
Til’ he no longer could be seen
For the sunshine
(Behind the clouds)

Another Beautiful morning
A Lover is set free
And the tree stands there
In November, Alone

Hark, honey
The tree does not cry
It knows the leaves
(Red, yellow, brown – green)
Will return
A clear day

Green lovers’ eyes
All I remember from that morning
(Is it the answer?)

Find each other
You see honey
Everybody meet twice
In a rainy park
Life makes circles
We should not cry
We will meet again
And that’s the answer

[Pseudomuse]

Great poem hon, I just loved it. Though the A in the first stanza doesn't read right, I think maybe if you used On, I think it would sound/look better.
cheers.

PM

[Sparks]

"Everybody meets twice"

...I'm going to go cry now.
Actually not, but that line is pretty cool because I definitely had a weird day a while ago where I wondered about that.
I've ran into a couple of people "twice".
I guess take advantage of that opportunity, take it from someone who regrets it.

OK.
I like it. It was cute.
I can't stand autumn so I don't know how I feel about the "feel" of the poem, but everything kind of went together and that's what we're going for.
<3

[Queen of Rain]

i love autumn, it works excellent as a symbol and ull fin it alooot in my poetry.. ... glad u found my poem cute and interesting...