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Post by roxiecheerchika on Apr 12, 2005 13:10:00 GMT -8
Harsh words where spoken,
of the days gone by.
And hearts where broken,
tears at the corner of her eye.
The smile that once was there,
has slowly drifted away.
Because they didn't care,
and now the sorrow is here to stay.
And they'll never know,
what they have done.
Each drop of pain,
comes with the rising sun.
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Post by foxyvolleyballchic on Apr 12, 2005 13:12:46 GMT -8
I really liked it and Im not just sayin cause Im ur friend. I think it was a tad short but all poems dont have 2 b long. If u dont mind me askin, wut is it about?
p.s. this makes 48!
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Post by roxiecheerchika on Apr 12, 2005 13:19:52 GMT -8
lol....haha very nice...ur using me now to gain posts..how sweet..lol...not fair...okay well it's kinda bout this girl who is constantly ridiculed and made fun of by people she knows and she is very sad....i got the inspiration from this movie you told me about...called...Odd Gurl Out.
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Post by foxyvolleyballchic on Apr 12, 2005 13:24:52 GMT -8
OMG that was such a good movie. It made me cry  |
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Post by roxiecheerchika on Apr 12, 2005 13:28:12 GMT -8
lol...same here...just hearing u explain wut was going on was sad...i just kinda tried to write a poem about how it made me feel...lol
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Post by foxyvolleyballchic on Apr 12, 2005 13:51:34 GMT -8
we should get 2gether and whach it!
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