I WISH

[usgeisha]

I wish it'd all just go away
I wish they could all diappear
I wish I was alone
I wish they'd let me be

I wish we'd be together
I wish you'd wish for me
I wish you'd see me, searching
The open sky for you

I wish for a lot of things
I wish that we could be
Forever, hand in hand
Sitting on a sofa
No one else around
But it will never be
It can never be

I wish that we could
Dance upon the velvet sky
Glittering stars, our only light
Night comes to a sudden halt
And a solemn good-bye

I wish they'd stop pitying me
I wish they'd go away
I wish that I could remember
Just the good things we had

No matter how much I wish
I know
That wishing doesn't make problems go away
Because you're still not here
Even though I wished
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I just kinda wrote this randomly... I know it drags on, but I just felt like writing and posting.

[Ramona]

Yeah, ti does kind of drag on and the ending does seem kind of abrupt for some odd reason, but other than that it was wonderful. I loved the concept and the line "I wish you'd wish for me," was awesome.

[Queen of Rain]

im no big fan of repetition poetry where it feels em repetetive... i love the rhythm in this one though and some line, are as mentioned excellent...

[foxyvolleyballchic]

Im no a big fan of this kind of poem either but I reated to it so uch I couldnt help but love it