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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 3, 2005 7:33:54 GMT -8
Process of Decay
Life-wasting Bodies Disintegrating You sleep on your pillow Made of purple glass And walls of Sunday Morningpaper All pages blank and edges so sharp Nowhere have you screamed Falling apart?
So you close your eyes No reason for screaming Dustbins are full But we could always recycle To warm you sauna Through burning our flesh
Forgive our mortality As we metamorphose
Thank you We’ll terminate as we flew With nothing to do Now make use of our breathing In crematory of blind We’ll finally dissolve
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Post by ScarletMornings on Apr 3, 2005 9:37:16 GMT -8
the stuff you write is just cool. i don't know where you get some of the lines you put in here, but i'm glad you do. this is so vivid, and just really, really neat. awesome job. AMAZING job.
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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 3, 2005 10:36:06 GMT -8
thank you, all these lines just comes up in my head, most of these as I walked arund in the surrealsim part at Tate modern.. im very glad u like all the weird things my brain produces...
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Post by Pseudomuse on Apr 12, 2005 17:11:53 GMT -8
ooo purple glass I want some! great job as always. Though the last line Falling Apart?, the placement made reading it a little confusing at first. I love the line -- Forgive our mortality. Such a great line. Keep it up.
peace PM
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