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Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 22, 2005 20:38:42 GMT -8
what do you guys think? should I add more? ----- The MirrorImages
The mirrorimages Speak in heartfelt lullabies Wishing spring green and Ocean blue On everything in sight Including me And the midastouch of singsong Plagerizes my thoughts Into a raid of heroic couplets Like Wordsworth or Keats Impaled my soul Selfsame imagery as Ode to the Grecian Urn And it fathers complacency And I am complacent In sweet nostalgic reverie And this beachchair rigid oasis comforts me And I am comforted
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Post by Ramona on Mar 23, 2005 18:01:20 GMT -8
Awesome as it is, but i think it'sd be even better if there was more of it.
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Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 25, 2005 10:49:50 GMT -8
danke! yeah i haven't figured out what else to write on this, but maybe someday i will.
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