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Mar 14, 2005 19:55:17 GMT -8
Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 14, 2005 19:55:17 GMT -8
this also was posted under untitled, and its changed a bit, i hope you guys can understand it better. PM ------ No More
Dr. Day held my heart In his hands, the bloodied pulp contorting In his warped appendage After he busted me out Splintering my ribs into a myriad of unmatching Pieces He promised me wings Oh, god, he did words tumbling Off his tongue and through pursed lips Singeing me orgasmic leaving me prostrate Please I moaned His lustful eyes now watch my heart As fingers nimbly fashion wings Shoving my heart back in its Shattered cage, though hesitantly He sutured my malleable Flesh back together So I climbed Jacob’s ladder And Jack laughed from his cloud At my misconceptions for this Wasn’t fashioned from any fairytale (I didn’t trade a cow for anything Here.) Plastered to the legde The traffic is so pretty, in this Concretewastleland Flashing red, white and yellow The color of my flag though it lacks Color now I lift myself on manufactured Puppetstrings To paint the canvas With [my] diseased fingers Spreading my flag on the Barecement (seeped in barecement dreams) I have wings now For breath is overrated here. No more No more
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Mar 15, 2005 7:58:12 GMT -8
Post by Queen of Rain on Mar 15, 2005 7:58:12 GMT -8
i like this poem, its even better now, less too-complicated just deep and amazing..
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Mar 15, 2005 19:23:21 GMT -8
Post by frontpagenews on Mar 15, 2005 19:23:21 GMT -8
If I told you that I could grasp fully what you mean in this poem I would be lying. But thats a good thing because that makes it intriguing. I like this version better...
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