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Post by midnightwhitewolf on Mar 13, 2005 20:20:30 GMT -8
"Oopsie" I said out loud to the class, And I started to erease the mistake But THen all around me started to Quake THe teacher looked up from his desk, SO large And looked so angry, I could swear he would charge "What did You Say!" INgired the sir "Nothing much, but the soup needs stir" "Did You make a mistake, A mistake in my Class?" "No Sir No! I was watching the cars pass!" And with that he looked down, Into his files deep And pulled from his desk, something that read "For Heaven's sake Keep!" He opened it up, and searched it right through But found almost none of it to be true! He glared at me one more time, and so he sat down. So Funny and Sad, He Looked like a clown THen the class all around, let out a great sigh For I defeated the teacher dude guy!
Lol, also wrote this one for the contest, entered this one. Give me your thoughts
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Post by darktears on Mar 13, 2005 20:23:10 GMT -8
HA HA....that is soo cute, very funny.
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Post by frontpagenews on Mar 13, 2005 20:34:08 GMT -8
Its cute. I like the ideas within this piece. The ryhme seems forced though. All in all very nice.
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