out of my head

[frontpagenews]

get out of my mind
you dont deserve to be there
i dont want you in there
all i think about is you
you, its drives me insane
so just leave
leave me alone
i cant keep thinking
not about you

with you in my mind
i cant function
i cant breathe
i cant eat
i cant sleep
so just go
get out of my mind

[Ramona]

It was a pretty good poem, I liked the repetiton in the 'I can't.../' part.

[Queen of Rain]

agree good repetition, still think your poems could gain some form using imagery..