Fall Away

[frontpagenews]

Fall away from me
Fall until you hit the ground
Fall so you can feel the pain
The pain that consumes me
The pain that strikes me at every turn
The pain that you created
That you created when you left
That you created when you built me up
That you created when you made me fall
Fall so deep in love with you
Fall so fast for you, so
Fall, fall away from me

[kaidanasnan]

I like it. Sorry I can't be more helpful, but I can't think of any words today.

[Queen of Rain]

excellent.. however I think you should name it Autumn, since that is a synonym for fall and it woudl relate to the imagery of falling considering leaves.. but thats just an idea..

[frontpagenews]

thanks it was just kinda spur of the moment, hmm seems like that is how i write almost everything, Im glad you like it!

[behindTHEmask]

I like how after a few lines, you took the last phrase out and made that your beginning phrases.
It was sweet.
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