Passionfruit

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	Passionfruit Mar 9, 2005 4:27:25 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Mar 9, 2005 4:27:25 GMT -8 Feed me Passionfruits Seduce me Soft in the middle Slowly spreading out Opening to see the heart Eat me Feed me Seduce this passion And only passion once again inspried by DH Lawrence's flower poetry...
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Passionfruit Mar 9, 2005 12:07:05 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 9, 2005 12:07:05 GMT -8 ooooo. i loved it. very . . . passionate. ;D
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Passionfruit Mar 10, 2005 15:56:47 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Mar 10, 2005 15:56:47 GMT -8 It was short and sweet, I think the imagery could be expanded a bit, though, just a few more adjectives here and there.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

frontpagenews Guest	Passionfruit Mar 11, 2005 13:45:37 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by frontpagenews on Mar 11, 2005 13:45:37 GMT -8 I liked it very very much. One thing the line "eat me" kinda through me off. Maybe try "consume me" then it would go both ways?