Let's Go

[darktears]

Back in teh shadows back in the crowd. Nothing to do or to say. Darkness dancing across the sky the moon shining on my cowboy boots.
*bridge* I will just leave this crowd and be miyself.
*chorus*I'm ready let's go. Go through teh show. Let's fly through the sky and feel like we're on top of teh world.
Oh on top of the world.
Wishin' that everything was just great and was just fine oh all the time. I know things won't go my way, but I learned to say 'so what'
*bridge* I will just leave this crowd and be myself.
*chorus*I'm ready let's go. Go through teh show. Let's fly through the sky and feel like we're on top of the world.
*chorus*I'm ready let's go. Go through teh show. Let's fly through the sky and feel like we're on top of the world.
I'm just great I'm just fine don't worry 'bout me. As long as I know what's ahead on this road. Since I can't see.
Back int eh shadows. Back in the crowd.
*chorus*I'm ready let's go. Go through the show. Let's fly throught the sky and feel like we're on top of the world.
Darkness dancing across the sky the moon shining on my cowboy boots.
*chorus* I'm ready let's go. Go throuigh the show. Let's fly through the sky and feel liek we're on top of the world.
*chorus*I'm ready let's go. Go throught he show. Let's fly through teh sky and feel like we're on top of the world.
Back in the shadows back in teh crowd.
*Fade*

||Done||

What didi you think?

[darktears]

Guess nobody is comin'

[behindTHEmask]

Well, it's really hard to read because of the way you wrote it, but it's okay. It doesn't seem like there is a meaning to it, and what's "teh"? Did you mean "the"?

It has some awkward phrasing.

But it isn't bad. It has potential. . .It just needs some work.

[junipercayenne]

A few spelling mistakes and needs better formatting. Some of the wording is hard to read, work on your word choce..

[darktears]

Oh well I did mean "the", but I accidentally put "teh" I was typing fast. And it is my first song so it's not the best