Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare

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Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Mar 30, 2006 6:44:36 GMT -8

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Post by Ramona on Mar 30, 2006 6:44:36 GMT -8

Pierce me a blind man’s stare:
Blue eyes alert
All twinkle – no lies
Knowingly glare away triumphs
My unconscious debate
Versus her classical state

Say my damage:
Set my stride
For no tongue is so fierce
No look is so raw
As this

The girl who dreams:
A fool for beliefs:
Shall cut you down
To rest in peace

by Confusion

*NOTE:* Sorry about the username confusion (ha ha ha...bad joke.)

Last Edit: Apr 3, 2006 8:41:59 GMT -8 by Ramona

"Hold my head inside your hands.
I need someone who understands.
I need someone, someone who hears.
For you I've waited all these years.

For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come,
Until my day, my day is done.
And say you'll come and set me free.
Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Mar 30, 2006 16:41:28 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Mar 30, 2006 16:41:28 GMT -8 whoa. no. not by me. not talented enough to write this piece. (it's pretty amazing don't you agree?) no, i believe confusion wrote it. i'll go check now....
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

Pseudomuse Senior Writer We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer. Posts: 489	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Mar 30, 2006 22:03:54 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 30, 2006 22:03:54 GMT -8 Yeah, its by Confusion. I love, love, love the last lines.
	You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion" I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way. If you want to call me that, smile. Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Apr 1, 2006 7:36:30 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Apr 1, 2006 7:36:30 GMT -8 thank youuuu! <3
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Apr 3, 2006 8:42:45 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Apr 3, 2006 8:42:45 GMT -8 Erg, sorry about that. I think this is already the second time I've mixed up usernames. And wasn't it you, cookies4breakfast, last time, too?
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Apr 3, 2006 14:22:17 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Apr 3, 2006 14:22:17 GMT -8 wait, wasn't it confusion and me? hmmm.. i'll ponder.... but this is still amazing!
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare Apr 3, 2006 16:02:54 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Apr 3, 2006 16:02:54 GMT -8 I don't know, again, I have confused the two.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

Pierce Me a Blind Man's Stare

Post by Ramona on Mar 30, 2006 6:44:36 GMT -8

Post by cry,crayola. on Mar 30, 2006 16:41:28 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Mar 30, 2006 22:03:54 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Apr 1, 2006 7:36:30 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Apr 3, 2006 8:42:45 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Apr 3, 2006 14:22:17 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Apr 3, 2006 16:02:54 GMT -8